I write one paragraph about my weekend.
First, Friday,after school I arrived home, and picked up my child at 3:15 P.M. Second, school have been taking money(for ticket, juice,....) for Cinema program for every two month,and we had to go there.third, saturday my child and I went to Fairview mall, and after that studied math and science because, she have exam today(Monday). Fours, my family and I sometime have been talking together for two, or three hours, and we taught to my child about future, life, school, her friend,and something she needs.finally I did my presentation, and our weekend were usefull and fun.
It seems like you had a good weekend and had lots of things to do! Try to remember next time that when you write a paragraph you don't need to write a number before each sentence (ex. first, second, third, fourth) because you're sentences flow with out them! :)
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